And here's where I admit I have never seen Top Gun. *shameless squinty grins*

And you are /more/ than welcome with the chapters, thank YOU for letting me see them! I'm just sorry, more than I can say, how long it took me to get them back. I've still got the last two or three to go I think, and if I were you I wouldn't worry a bit about editing. Like I know what I'm talking about when it comes to commas anyway! /commahOr ;P

*snogs you for shared squee and just cause i can and i wanna omg*